Francesca reached for a piece of bacon, her baby blue eyes wide. “How can you not want to go to Mars? It’s a two year adventure -- the chance of a lifetime! If I was old enough to buy a ticket, I would.”
Katrina had no doubt of the truth of that statement. Francesca had been fighting Katrina’s plans for her since she popped out of the womb.

So you've typed "The End" after months of working on your novel. You sit back, smile, and sigh, thinking you are just a few clicks away from publication. Just another time through ought to do it, right?
WRONG!!
Slow down, and let's do this thing right, lest your first review calls you out for repetitive phrases, misspelled words, grammar errors and other typos.


